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IELTS General Writing Task 2: Essay

In IELTS General Writing Task 2, you are asked to write a discursive essay in response to a point of view, argument or problem. The essay can be fairly personal in style (semi-formal/neutral) and has to be at least 250 words.

Here is an example how the task prompt looks like:

WRITING TASK 2 (General)

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that one should retire at the age of 60 or 65. Others say that people should be allowed to work for as long as they want to.

What is your opinion about this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

IELTS essay sample

How to write an IELTS essay?

You must start with spending some time reading the instructions. It is very important that you fully understand what you are asked to do. You should spend at least 2 minutes planning your essay:

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  1. Read the instructions thoroughly
  2. Brainstorm, write down the main keywords and ideas
  3. Introduction: paraphrase the topic
  4. Essay body: develop your ideas and add supporting points
  5. Conclusion: sum up what you have written and make sure you don't introduce new ideas and thoughts that you have not covered in your essay

TIP! Use cohesive devices to link your ideas.

Your essay will be evaluated against IELTS band descriptors.

IELTS Essay Sample (Corrected)

Some people think that one should retire at the age of 60 or 65. Others say that people should be allowed to work for as long as they want to.

What is your opinion about this?

Demography in western countries indicates that there will be more and more elderly people in the future. Due to better healthcare systems that are available and stricter requirements for working environments, the life expectancy of people has risen inover/with time. This has made people discussing whether people in their retirement age should stop working, or just the opposite, they should be more engaged in society and offered a chance to work as long as they want in spite of their highadvanced age.

On the one hand, according to the fact that population is ageing in western countries, itan ageing population is gradually putting more pressure on younger generations who have to support elderly people. For instance, providing that there is an increasing number of elderly people, the people in theirof working age will have to pay more tax to provide elderly people with access to healthcare services and to enable government to support them financially. Therefore, allowing people at the age of retirement to work as long as they want to would be something that both the government and pensioners could benefit from.

On the other hand, the list of occupations that would fitbe suitable for (opened to) older people should be limited. There are many specific work tasks that may not be very suitable for older people, especially work duties that require agood physical fitfitness. Thus, aA good example would be a policeman who has to have agood physical stamina in order to stop criminals or even a firefighter who may have to climb on theladders or roofs. However, it would be reasonable to assess a person's suitability for a certain position regarding tohis or her age individually and on a case by case basis.

To sum up, I personally believe that offering elderly people a choice to be engaged in work and to stay active instead of quitting their job is better both for the whole society and themselves.

(314 words)

7.5

Band Score Estimate
(prior to corrections)

Brief comments:

  • thus = and so
  • regarding / with regard to / regarding to

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